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Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Short Story Awesomeness

Your short stories are seriously awesome. I'm glad now I'm not the only one who gets to read them...

They tell me I am happy (Dakota S, 3rd)

With a sooty rag he scrubbed away at the filmy glass, and sneezed a few times in the process. (Alex W, 6th) 


He had now been walking the basement for hours. (Jack B, 3rd)

A sigh escapes her. A breath of fog appears on the window, clouding the morning. With trembling fingers, she removes the key from the ignition. A beat, a pause, and she sits, her fingers clenched around the solidity. (Annabel N, 1st)

I looked out my window to see my grandma sitting in the back of a red convertible with hot red flames painted across the sides. (Ben G, 1st)

It was November of 2006. She woke up to the bright glimmers of the snow slowly seeping through her window. Friday, she thought to herself. It’s Friday. Something was tugging at her. She couldn’t put her finger on it. (Molly S., 3rd)

Once upon a time there was a girl named Victoria. Wait, let me start over. The beginning is used in fairy tales and this isn't close to one. (Karina R, 6th)

The kiddos loved drawing so damn much that they started anunderground Draw Club.
1st rule of Draw Club, Don’t talk about Draw Club
2nd rule of Draw Club, (You get the joke) (Dan W, 6th)

It’s high noon in a small, generic western town.  (Robert C, 3rd)

He winked at me as I boarded the train and passed through the men’s section to the back of the bus where my wife was waiting for me. (Hannah K, 3rd)

Today, I found a cave. Not just any cave. This one is darker than anything I have seen in my life. (Keenan D, 6th)

Liz had been alone for ten months now. (Jordan R, 1st)

All the readings seemed normal, I thought as I recorded my findings into the database. My cat, Meep, meowed next to my feet, begging for food. (Ginger B, 1st)

New York pulsed in the morning, sirens its pacemaker, its arteries more congested than Paula Deen’s. (Daniel I, 6th)

Anybody would have pinned him as just a tourist walking down the streets of Spain. (Robert W, 3rd)

As the day begins, Mike awakes from all his sneaker boxes collapsing and his alarm clock going off continuously. (Francisco A, 6th)

They left me. 
The mothership took off with my brothers and sisters and they just left me behind. (Josh B, 3rd)

You open your eyes, a bright stark white rapidly engulfed by pitch black nothingness.  (Rodrigo G, 1st)

About two decades ago the Kingdom found its new bounty and it came in the form of a new dimension through a door in the ruins of the city of Obscurity.   (Gaurav B, 1st)

There was no light in her eyes. She stared pointedly at the table. Even her tears were long gone. (Haley Rae, 1st)

On one half of the world the day was perfectly fine; on the other the night was one of the most peaceful one could hope for.  (Will B, 6th)

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Blog Carnival #2: My First Car


This is my first car, a 1982 Oldsmobile Firenza that I named "Burner." 

Don't laugh. 

It was as stick shift so I felt like a race car driver. 

It had a little orange light on the dash that would light up and say "shift" when it was time to shift to the next gear. I hated that light. I covered it with an "Abolish Apartheid" sticker so that instead of telling me to shift all the time, my car would light up to make a political statement instead. (South Africa officially abolished apartheid in 1991, btw--I'm sure it was all because of my car). 

And even though I never would have chosen the color, or the family four-door styling, I loved this car. It was my freedom. 

My wheels. 

It's decorated here for homecoming of my senior year at Northglenn High School (not sure why I wrote "NGHS" on my car when Northglenn is clearly one word, so NHS?). 

This is the car that terrified me until I figured out the clutch. All it took was my brother John taking me for one driving lesson after my mom had tried to explain to me how the clutch worked. Her explanation did not work. John's did. 

This is the car that used to take me on afternoon adventures where I would point at the mountains and just drive west from Westminster until I hit them (ended up in Eldorado Canyon one day doing that). 

This is the car that went on Slurpee runs and through the drive through at Taco Bell umpteen times for taco salads and bean burritos. 

This is the car that used to drive too fast through the abandoned drive-in movie theater, catching air on the little hills that you would park your car on so your seats would be appropriately reclined for viewing the screen (don't tell my parents I did that, k?). 

This is the car I got my one and only speeding ticket in. The car I wrecked (totaled actually, but we fixed it anyhow--see you can't even tell in this picture, can you?). (Okay, so maybe 16 was my worst year of driving--totally safe since then). 

This is the car that Jeremy borrowed on homecoming afternoon so he could pick me up to take me to dinner and to the dance (after he spread rumors that I said I didn't want to go to homecoming with him anymore because he didn't have a car himself) (I DID NOT say that). 

This is the car that lost its muffler when I went over train tracks too fast trying to find Paris on the Platte (again, the year of 16). 

This is the car I sat in after my junior year spring band concert where I found out I had been selected as drum major for senior year--I turned on the radio and "I wish It Would Rain" by Phil Collins came on, and I knew it was a sign from the universe that my senior band season was going to rock (we had taken state sophomore year in the rain, so the rain had kind of become this thing for us). (see the photo below for evidence of how we did indeed rock our senior season)

This is the car the trumpet section blocked in totally--like completely surrounded with cars on all sides--after marching band practice one day while the color guard captain and I were talking with the band director. They blocked in her car too, and none of the perpetrators were anywhere to be seen to move their cars. We were stuck. So we pushed Paul Teddy's Jeep onto the baseball field and I think somehow locked it behind a gate? How did we do that?

This is the car that I drove in with the windows down and the music blasting on summer nights--cool night air my companion as I drove home by curfew. 

This is the car that stalled out on me at the Quebec street exit off of 270 one frigid below zero December night. The heat wasn't working either, and I had just driven from Boulder, and I was dressed for the ballet that I was going to with Becca (no boots, no warm socks...). I thought I was going to freeze there on the shoulder of the exit ramp, but somehow I got it to start again and limp along for another couple of miles, which was far enough to get me where I was going. 

This is the car that took me to college. 

This is the car I sadly had to say goodbye to in 1994, replaced by a white Ford Escort named "Snoopy." What an annoying car--but I won't complain. My parents handed me the title when I graduated from college. It never once broke down on me (not even when the tires were horribly worn and Snoopy was loaded down with all my worldly possessions as I moved from Missoula to Seattle in 1996--not sure how the tires didn't explode on me on that drive). 

I miss that car. 

color guard captains Keri and Beth, drum major me, drum captain Eric, holding our state championship swag


doing my drum major thing


Monday, February 16, 2015

The Cats (a poem by Jane)

The cats are cute,
Sure.
They may purr now,
But before you know it,
The back of your head will be shredded to bits by these terrors.
Sure,
They’re sleeping now.
Get ready for the night.
They prowl and yowl,
Waiting for you to throw that disgusting pom-pom for them.
Yes,
They’re snuggling now.
But when they are all alone,
One forces the other one into a corner and they fight.
I see that they are out of the kitchen now.
Soon your butter dish will be knocked down and licked clean.
These are the actions of the wretched cats,
That prowl in my house day and night,
Looking for prey to hunt down and annoy.

Thursday, January 22, 2015

So it Goes; let's be kind to one another: Blog Carnival #1 (6th)

Dear Sam, Stefan, Michelle, and Karina,

Sam and Stefan, you both wrote about So it Goes. For Stefan it captures how he has dealt with a personal loss. And Stefan, your story helps to illustrate why it's so important to treasure our time and make the most of it, as Sam has now figured out.

Michelle and Karina--you both wrote about dogs. Michelle volunteers every weekend to help take care of the dogs at the Humane Society. And Karina's story about how she lost her dog, Princess, is heartbreaking.

All of these posts remind us that we need more kindness in our world, as you say, Michelle.

Thank you, all four of you, for your stories and for making meaningful connections to Slaughterhouse Five. You've provided some thoughtful things for us to think about today in this first Blog Carnival.

Most sincerely,

Doc Z

Along The Road, good guys/bad guys, love, fear, happiness, and sharing your leftovers: Blog Carnival #1 (1st Hour)

The Road is getting you all to some very interesting thinking about your research.

Let me explain. Sophie wonders, is it easier to be a good guy or a bad guy? For Tatiana, fear and love work together--and fear of losing someone she loves crippled her once. Read her post for the story. Izzy G writes of her grandfather, and the powerful example he was to her of unconditional love. Ginger's post will make you wonder about what you would do if a homeless person asked you for your Cheesecake Factory leftovers. Would you share? If not, why not? Niraj makes the point that sometimes the best option is NOT going out with your friends. He chooses to stay in some times, but he doesn't worry about missing out. He has good reasons. Happiness might be the ultimate thing that drives us, according to Izze BKyle's post reveals the lengths he goes to for love. Would you give up your morals because of fear? Read Tony's post to ponder that. Sienna is trying to figure out what it's all about--life, that is. I bet some of you are on a similar path. Emma ponders fear of strangers.

What does this all of to do with The Road? A lot. I guess you'll have to read to see how. Don't forget to leave comments to respond--share your own stories, ask questions, explain where you connect with your classmates' ideas. Have fun at your first blog carnival!

Strength, water, fears, kindness, Star Wars, and staying alive on the Road: Blog Carnival #1 (3rd hour)

(a host post poem)

Being alive
is the most difficult challenge
we all face (Haley).

Do you agree?

Or do you fear
being average? (Reci).

What's inside of the VCR-- (Collin)
Cars, airplanes, Eqypt, or Star Wars
perhaps.

You have the strength
to survive zombies. (Mitch)

But maybe not
if you don't have water. (Josh B)

Kindness is weakness? (Karen)

All things to ponder along The Road.

(and Molly's)

Monday, January 5, 2015

I Heart Mini Habits

So I read this blog post over break.

And I learned about the power of the mini habit.

You should read the blog post so you get the guy's story about how this all came about, but the idea is that instead of putting before yourself these huge goals that feel unachievable sometimes and that make you feel bad when you don't succeed with them, set smaller, more achievable goals.

Mini ones.

Here are my current mini habits:
  • Write ONE sentence each day toward my book project.
  • Read ONE paragraph each day during my morning oatmeal from a professional book about teaching.
  • Choose not to go to Facebook ONCE per day.
  • Read ONE paragraph is a book for me each day.
These little teeny tiny goals are easy for me to achieve each day. And when I achieve them, I feel successful. Feeling success breeds more success. 

On most days, I end up doing more than the mini goal. I'll write several paragraphs, or read several pages, or save lots of time I would have previously wasted in Facebook land. 

But doing more is not the goal. The goal is doing the mini habit, every day. 

I'm a believer. You should try this too!